Andrew: Operation MIA Funny but needs serios work
you get a star for humor but there are several problems that i am sure you have heard several times by now.
1> stick legs... common, really? and here i was thinking that we graduated from stick figures....... nope.
2> the plot is good but the script needs work. also the text kinda going a little too fast for all of our viewers to keep up..
3> voice overs... you did it for the girl why not finish it and give the guys one too.
other than that it was funny but that isn't enough to pass