Gilxen's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bunnykill 5 Part 1]

Aww... Snowball died! this is a first

beautiful graphics 10V/10A Keep up the good work!

[SMRPG Waltz of the Forest]

NICE!!

excellent job on the animation and screen transfers, the only thing I noticed is the cropping is off when you click the "expand Movie" button

[Tankmen:Dual part 1]

Nice

I am going to have to agree with Sparten517 those two voice actors almost sound forced. other than that i give this one two thumbs up

[Phoenix Ash Opening]

Refreshing!

quick question: does Phoen activate his powers at will?
and when can we expect to see the first episode?

Dayu responds:

hi there!
uhm...no, there are a few things that must happen before.

When I improved my skills I'll upload a better opening, so maybe things like Phoen's power explains itself?

[Andrew: Operation MIA]

Funny but needs serios work

you get a star for humor but there are several problems that i am sure you have heard several times by now.

1> stick legs... common, really? and here i was thinking that we graduated from stick figures....... nope.

2> the plot is good but the script needs work. also the text kinda going a little too fast for all of our viewers to keep up..

3> voice overs... you did it for the girl why not finish it and give the guys one too.

other than that it was funny but that isn't enough to pass

POIZIN responds:

Well it did pass and i do appreciate your honest criticism. My work will develop over time. Anyways thanks for the review

[Life with Navi]

ROFLMAO!!!!

A little short for my taste.
great animation... (not the best, but it is up there)
again as been said before... "crisp audio"
well done! definitely sharing this one with my friends!

[World of Warcraft Hentai!]

If you are looking for talent... go somewere else

The sad part is that i actually had to force myself to finish watching this to give a honest review. so i came up with a few pointers.

1 > make sure that your title is appropriate for the animation. this is not hentai... so don't call it that.

2 > work on your sound quality. it is sad to say that the intro before the vid was the only thing that could be heard clearly. the voice acting was so terrible that i actually couldn't understand most of what was said.

3 > animation.... when there are voice acting parts make sure to dub them. this requires more effort than you were apparently willing to put out. try making your characters move verses just alternating between two pics. want help look up tweening in your flash tutorial.

4 > scripting... judging by what i could hear. your scripting talents are nil. one of the best methods i have found in creating a good script is actually to "throw your ideas around" "get feed-back" Before you start your project. odds are you will get a good idea if people will accept your "storyline" before you start your project.

Honestly overall the intro was the only good part of this animation. the rest was worse than a disappointment.

[Castle III part A]

Muwhahahaha Nice

not bad. not sure if it is intentional but you have some white noise with the voices, other than that great job

[Moonlight]

Creative with definate talent

By far this is some of the better work I have seen. Though I wished there was a little more to that storyline. Like how the king became corrupt in the first place. Is there a source to this evil? Will the evil spread again, and will there be a new hero to take the fallen ones place? These are just a few questions that come to mind. However as I have said before this is some really great work. I am looking forward to the next one you put out there for us.