Age/Gender: 26, Male
Location: Spokane, WA
Job: Truck Driver
Ok. looks as though things are not going as smoothly as i would have liked my computer has managed to fry and untill i get it fixed i will have to use the library computers. (LAME) but i figured as soon as i do get things fixed i might have a contribution
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quick question: does Phoen activate his powers at will?
and when can we expect to see the first episode?
Author's Response:
hi there!
uhm...no, there are a few things that must happen before.
When I improved my skills I'll upload a better opening, so maybe things like Phoen's power explains itself?
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unfortunately after slashing the heartless many times after it's life disappeared i realized that there was no way to beat the thing.
still needs work
Author's Response:
you can beat it, if do not understand the battle system please play Ep1
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you get a star for humor but there are several problems that i am sure you have heard several times by now.
1> stick legs... common, really? and here i was thinking that we graduated from stick figures....... nope.
2> the plot is good but the script needs work. also the text kinda going a little too fast for all of our viewers to keep up..
3> voice overs... you did it for the girl why not finish it and give the guys one too.
other than that it was funny but that isn't enough to pass
Author's Response:
Well it did pass and i do appreciate your honest criticism. My work will develop over time. Anyways thanks for the review
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