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Ok. looks as though things are not going as smoothly as i would have liked my computer has managed to fry and untill i get it fixed i will have to use the library computers. (LAME) but i figured as soon as i do get things fixed i might have a contribution
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quick question: does Phoen activate his powers at will?
and when can we expect to see the first episode?
Author's Response:
hi there!
uhm...no, there are a few things that must happen before.
When I improved my skills I'll upload a better opening, so maybe things like Phoen's power explains itself?
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unfortunately after slashing the heartless many times after it's life disappeared i realized that there was no way to beat the thing.
still needs work
Author's Response:
you can beat it, if do not understand the battle system please play Ep1
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you get a star for humor but there are several problems that i am sure you have heard several times by now.
1> stick legs... common, really? and here i was thinking that we graduated from stick figures....... nope.
2> the plot is good but the script needs work. also the text kinda going a little too fast for all of our viewers to keep up..
3> voice overs... you did it for the girl why not finish it and give the guys one too.
other than that it was funny but that isn't enough to pass
Author's Response:
Well it did pass and i do appreciate your honest criticism. My work will develop over time. Anyways thanks for the review
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game needs a little work but overall not bad, and actually fun...
if it were me i would make the game stop with the music so players don't get a bunch of misses as they try to stop the game to find out there score, and hit/miss ratio.
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A little short for my taste.
great animation... (not the best, but it is up there)
again as been said before... "crisp audio"
well done! definitely sharing this one with my friends!
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"If you are looking for talent... go somewere else"
The sad part is that i actually had to force myself to finish watching this to give a honest review. so i came up with a few pointers.
1 > make sure that your title is appropriate for the animation. this is not hentai... so don't call it that.
2 > work on your sound quality. it is sad to say that the intro before the vid was the only thing that could be heard clearly. the voice acting was so terrible that i actually couldn't understand most of what was said.
3 > animation.... when there are voice acting parts make sure to dub them. this requires more effort than you were apparently willing to put out. try making your characters move verses just alternating between two pics. want help look up tweening in your flash tutorial.
4 > scripting... judging by what i could hear. your scripting talents are nil. one of the best methods i have found in creating a good script is actually to "throw your ideas around" "get feed-back" Before you start your project. odds are you will get a good idea if people will accept your "storyline" before you start your project.
Honestly overall the intro was the only good part of this animation. the rest was worse than a disappointment.
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Love the concept. blast a rocket powered turtle that is rigged with explosives out of a cannon only then to shoot/blow-up multiple times to get the farthest distance.
once i unlocked everything i proceeded the attempt one last time...
566,447 FT. not as high as i was hoping for but then again...
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not bad. not sure if it is intentional but you have some white noise with the voices, other than that great job
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Nice job with the master mind game. You did an excellent job with giving the classical game the new age look. I loved all of the burns the mastermind gives when you foul up a guess. This truly is a work of art.
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SHjames has a good point there. Many of you are focusing too much on the OMG dicks! The main point of reviews is the quality of the work... not your penis joke preferences.
Overall good animation and excellent voice acting
Keep up the good work
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